I love ice cream and everyone who knows me well knows I love
chocolate, yet I never buy chocolate ice cream.
Give me rich vanilla floating in hot chocolate sauce topped with whipped
cream, nuts, and a cherry! A few days ago a neighbor I love dearly crossed the
street to give me a half gallon of chocolate ice cream. I thanked her and we laughed about our mutual
chocolate addiction before I stuck the ice cream in the freezer, thinking, "I don't even remember the last time I
had plain chocolate ice cream."
The next day I had an appointment with the doctor who is
treating me for my pancreas problem. She
surprised me by telling me that when my older brother died almost five years
ago of pancreatic cancer, a small piece of his pancreas was preserved and the piece
from my biopsy was being compared to his to see if there is a genetic link
between his problem and mine. If there
is, my pancreas will have to be removed; if not then we'll just wait and see if
the cysts on mine turn malignant. Who
would have thought a tiny piece of tissue from so long ago could play such an
important role in my life today or that my brother could play such a major role
in my future five years after his death?
This bit of information played on my mind on the drive home
and my thoughts kept turning to the big brother with whom I shared a surprising
number of similarities. We both loved
milk, we both loved acting in plays, we both had asthma and hay fever, he
taught me my multiplication tables and how to divide, and we both loved to
read. I turned my thoughts to the tasks
I needed to accomplish when I got home including the fact that we have a peach
tree, loaded with fruit, that needs to be picked. It reminded me that my brother loved peach
pie piled high with chocolate ice cream.
I didn't bake a pie, but I fixed a heaping bowl of fresh sliced peaches,
added a generous serving of the chocolate ice cream my friend gave me, and
topped it with whipped cream. I'm sure it
was far more calories than I needed, but it was delicious and I had a strong feeling my brother was watching
and grinning his approval. It also made
me doubt my friend's sudden decision to give me chocolate ice cream was a
coincidence.
I just finished reading a book by Camron Wright that
impressed me with his ability to handle coincidences/small miracles in such an
easy smooth manner, the reader isn't even quite aware a small miracle has
occurred, and if the reader isn't inclined to believe in miracles, the event
can be dismissed as luck or a fortunate coincidence. I like this in
storytelling because that's the way most miracles occur in life and oddly
enough, they seem to carry more emotional impact than the big "hit me over
the head" miracles complete with angels or the cavalry do. Just as these
small "maybe miracles" touch our hearts and give life and its
problems boosts of hope and courage, really good writers touch our hearts in the
same way, granting the reader a moment's introspection, bringing to mind a half
buried poignant memory, and lighting a candle of faith.
A couple in our ward was chosen by her company to experience
a wonderful dream vacation these past couple of weeks. They traveled to Rome, then to Paris, now
onto the London Olympics. Through the
whole trip they have sent back via Face book the many, many pictures they've
taken. Because I know these people and
we've been friends for years, it's fun to see their European vacation through
their eyes. It's fun, exciting, and I can relate to their feelings and
reactions because I know them. This too,
when found in literature, is a sign of good writing. When the reader knows the characters well
enough to see through their eyes, the story becomes stronger, more
realistic.
There is a tendency for writers to try to create bigger
explosions, scarier chase scenes, more preposterous monsters, grosser
expletives, everything bigger, louder, and more dramatic. Originality and surprise are great, but it's the
careful attention to the small things that often makes a story memorable. If the heart can identify, the story is a
keeper.
1 comment:
Ahhh, Jennie, what a nice memory of your brother with the ice cream and peaches (although chocolate ice cream with caramel all over it is the BEST!). Love what you said about getting to know the characters in a story.
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